Nice story choice... I liked it more than I expected to. But then I've learned to trust your impeccable taste. :)
I don't really hear the plosives, but then those don't usually bother me much. It's the sibilants that make me want to pull my hair out, most days. I would love to find something to really fix those, once and for all.
Regardless, I especially liked the pacing in this one—very even—and the intro and outro music. Thanks for this!
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Date: 2013-11-15 03:53 pm (UTC)I don't really hear the plosives, but then those don't usually bother me much. It's the sibilants that make me want to pull my hair out, most days. I would love to find something to really fix those, once and for all.
Regardless, I especially liked the pacing in this one—very even—and the intro and outro music. Thanks for this!